Mar 15, 2011

16 Analyze writing unedited

If I were a bird I would fly high above the clouds soaring freely unencumbered and challenge myself to new heights and explore how far my lungs, wings and determination would carry me. I’d be mindful of the hands outstretched in peace implying comfort and tranquility; inferring warmth with promises to hold me and listen to my joyful chirps right before snaring me into a life of servitude to their pleasure and entertainment. There is no fulfillment in being a puppet, puppeteered and paraded at command and continually coerced into surrendering my will, my power, my happiness managing only to stifle my passions to live liberally and travel without hindrance for my captor the collaborator of self-indulgence intentionally paved my road to hell. It is simply not what rings my bell. For their assistance will succeed only in caging me to their will while victoriously circumventing my own and rending me infantile, irrelevant, wading my potential, desires, and passions invisible, null and void thwarting my autonym giving me a lobotomy and permanently castrating my ingenuity.


Repost…first published Sept.30.2010


  1. Submitted on 2010/10/08 at 10:07 AM
    Nice, like your new place. Added it as a place to sit while you are in my neighborhood. Hope all is well, Peace Ten

  2. Submitted on 2010/10/03 at 1:40 PM
    Well written as always. If you were a bird this place would be your new nest. Thanks for keeping in touch.

  3. “I’d be mindful of hands outstretched in peace…..” A most pertinent stream of consciousness in this day and time Ms Rhap. In actuality it is probably no more pertinent today than centuries ago because tyrants have always been on the prowl seeking those they might enslave. I suppose the problem in this day and time is that there are just more of the SOBs on the prowl. On the up side of that observation is the fact that there are more people out here willing to expose the slithering snakes!
    j, wishing you a great day!

    Submitted on 2010/10/03 at 10:50 AM

  4. That was a pretty candid post.Who would like to be a mere puppet in the hands of anyone however attractive surrendering all things held dear?.Any outstretched hand should pass muster in the touchtone of fairplay,equality in most things,a strong belief that each one has his/her private space,the freedom to pursue one’s goals unless it clashes with common good and above all genuine love for each other.To such a hand one can entrust safely even if it means not soaring so high as one would wish.
    I liked the way the post is written.

    Submitted on 2010/10/03 at 4:52 AM

  5. Free is as free as one thinks himself to be. I like your writing. Have a blessed day and week.

  6. I just confused myself at present time, would I stay only on blogspot? or both? just like you:-)
    The bird picture is a beautiful colour Fab, I like bright colours.

    Thank you for support me always,
    Enjoy your day,

    Submitted on 2010/09/30 at 7:05 PM

  7. If I were a bird I would hope that you would put something in the bird feeder for me. :-)
    Well said Fab!!

  8. awesome post, it came at the right time
    cos with all d stress am going thru rite now i wish i was a bird, so after 2months i can come bak to human form, then all my problems would have elapsed ... but obviously that can't happen

  9. The bird seems to mean freedom. I'm not particularly good at analyzing. If I were to take the bird analogy literally I'd have to decide what type of bird. A song bird or a bird of prey etc.. Both can fly. I think we all yearn to be able to soar and feel unincumbered by earthly realities. Reaching that freedom may or may not happen. The trick is to keep trying and never let your spirit be defeated.
    Hey, I gave it a shot. Nice words as always.

  10. Love the writing. Hope you put up more posts like this one.

  11. To be free like the bird & wind is an indescribable joy & peace...not bonded by the burden of this life!

    @Chizy k..i feel you oo :)


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