Jun 19, 2011

14 On The Wind Of A Sigh

tear

On the wind of a sigh

Crouched silence unfolds memories of you

It travels calmly down my face

Its salty flavour conveying the vividness of your laughter

Stillness pervades

On the wind of a sigh

The breeze feather like teartouch whispers your kiss

I feel you drip from my chin

Seep into the groove of my neck

Lingering

On the wind of a sigh

Your energy gathers momentum

To a determined destination

Pooling

It slivers easily into my chest

On the wind of a sigh   tear

It dissipates

Imprinting internal tattoos

Reminiscences

Preserved in the tracks of my tears

 

D.S.B.S. Rhapsody ©2011

14 comments:

  1. Brilliant imagery and wonderful employment of words to great effect,I liked this poem much.

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  2. Hello,

    Lovely poem written with great feeling and sensitivity.

    Best wishes,
    Joseph

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  3. *´¨)
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    (¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Albert Smith said it best when he said and I quote : Tears are the safety valve of the heart when too much pressure is laid on it.
    I guess what soap is for our bodies, tears do the same for our soul.

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  4. The poem is brilliant,sensuous and touching
    The journey of a drop of tear travelling down the chin ,neck and beyond is beautifully expressed. You are a wizard in words and awesome

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  5. I can relate. Nice, very nice.

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  6. A beautiful poem. Thank you Fab!!

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  7. I enjoy reading your poems.
    Enjoy your day.

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  8. Hi Rhapsody, I am pleased to inform you that you are the winner to the questions challenge on for my 100th post. So, do you want me to send you the Myne's book, 'A Love Rekindled' by email?

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  9. Awww this is sad!! :(

    So well written though

    Thanks for checking up on me! :)

    Adiya

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  10. This is a beautiful poem... Poetry is something so lovely- no prose can evoke the emotions or imagery that a good poem can.

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  11. "only love can break your heart".
    Sometimes you feel as if they are right there with you...sigh coming on.
    Powerful words.

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  12. Hmmm..a poem which i understood :) beautifully written.

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