On the wind of a sigh
Crouched silence unfolds memories of you
It travels calmly down my face
Its salty flavour conveying the vividness of your laughter
Stillness pervades
On the wind of a sigh
The breeze feather like 
I feel you drip from my chin
Seep into the groove of my neck
Lingering
On the wind of a sigh
Your energy gathers momentum
To a determined destination
Pooling
It slivers easily into my chest
On the wind of a sigh
It dissipates
Imprinting internal tattoos
Reminiscences
Preserved in the tracks of my tears
D.S.B.S. Rhapsody ©2011
Lovely.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant imagery and wonderful employment of words to great effect,I liked this poem much.
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ReplyDeleteLovely poem written with great feeling and sensitivity.
Best wishes,
Joseph
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(¸.•´ (¸.•` ¤ Albert Smith said it best when he said and I quote : Tears are the safety valve of the heart when too much pressure is laid on it.
I guess what soap is for our bodies, tears do the same for our soul.
The poem is brilliant,sensuous and touching
ReplyDeleteThe journey of a drop of tear travelling down the chin ,neck and beyond is beautifully expressed. You are a wizard in words and awesome
I can relate. Nice, very nice.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem. Thank you Fab!!
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading your poems.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your day.
Hi Rhapsody, I am pleased to inform you that you are the winner to the questions challenge on for my 100th post. So, do you want me to send you the Myne's book, 'A Love Rekindled' by email?
ReplyDeleteWoW,Its a lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteAwww this is sad!! :(
ReplyDeleteSo well written though
Thanks for checking up on me! :)
Adiya
This is a beautiful poem... Poetry is something so lovely- no prose can evoke the emotions or imagery that a good poem can.
ReplyDelete"only love can break your heart".
ReplyDeleteSometimes you feel as if they are right there with you...sigh coming on.
Powerful words.
Hmmm..a poem which i understood :) beautifully written.
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