Sep 20, 2011

34 HEART BEAT

heartbeatIn the still quiet night

I feel my heart beat

Its rhythm

Pulsating through my skin

The sweet rhythmic melody

In harmony with life

Lulled by its steady bass

I drift …

I rise

In the still of the quiet dawn

Soft warmth of the morning’s light

Kiss my face

Caress my skin

My heart’s tempo

Steady,

Reassuring,

Reaffirming,

Life …

My heart beat.

D.S.B.Rhapsody© All Rights Reserved

34 comments:

  1. Just think, if each and every one of us could keep a kind/ positive/empathetic flow like the tempo of our heartbeat; the world would be a better place. Great poem, positive vibes!

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  2. Good day Rap…Our heart is really quite amazing. What a creation.Greater yet…Is our spiritual heart which is designed to hold us together.Say warm my friend and safe travels…GregI like it here. Your space makes me think deeper away from my silliness.Be well and peace be with you.

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    1. hmmmmmm
      profound analysis
      thanks
      peace be with you as well

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  3. Life, wonderful life!

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  4. This is really beautiful. You have such a way with words it’s so touching. I love it!Hope you have a good week ahead.

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    1. ah Leona you have me blushing with your compliment.
      thank you

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  5. what a soothing piece this one is!

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  6. I likes your poem says you having a very happy life. Have a great day,Michiko

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    1. yes, happiness is a choice and i choose to be happy

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  7. I particularly love this piece you created. It goes right to my heart.

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  8. Love this poem.Every morning I wake up I am happy to be alive.

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    1. gratitude is an endearing quality to possess

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  9. Wonderful. You are so gifted with words. I hope that you enjoyed the video I posted of the laughing man. Hoping it brought a smile and chuckle. Have a wonderful week ahead! xo T~

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    1. thank you, may the flow continue.
      ah yes i remember, it was delightful and it did bring a smile to my face. thanks

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  10. Inspirational!
    "Stead
    Reaffirming
    Reassuring"

    That is it! So long as we still have breath, there is hope!

    - LDP

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    1. Hope is everything, its what keeps us from drowning.

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  11. really nice, Rhapsody, you will make a good poet you know...... keep them coming. thumps up!!

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    1. thank you for the compliment
      hope to see you again

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  12. Beautiful, just beautiful. What an awesome tribute to our lifeline...our hearts. This soothing poem lulls and calms just like the rhythmic thumping of a quiet still heartbeat.

    Love the poem, Rap!

    Have a terrific weekend.

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    1. as a sistah poet i thank you for such inspiring words.

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